Biblio Breakdown: A Thousand Splendid Suns, Part One

On subtlety in inciting incidents and characterization as an extension of one's relationships to others and one's culture.

Welcome to the inaugural Biblio Breakdown, a series in which we'll explore books not from the perspective of a reviewer or casual reader, but rather as writers. Every book has something to teach us about our own writing, and this series is designed to get us to examine just that.

To kick off things off, we'll be doing a deep dive into Khaled Hosseini's A Thousand Splendid Suns, a harrowing work of historical fiction that takes place in the latter half of the 20th century in principally Afghanistan, but Pakistan as well.

Before we get into breaking this one down, I want to say that I wholeheartedly recommend this book to anyone who feels that may have even only a casual interest in it after reading this post. I know this isn't meant to be a review or a recommendation, but if you haven't made time to read this one since its debut in 2008, you absolutely must.

Inciting Incident

As writers, we know the first five pages of any manuscript are crucial. In them, we need to give readers a look-in at our protagonist, what they want, what might stop them, and what our protagonist plans to do about it, more or less.

Then, of course, the goal is to accomplish all of the above in as compelling of a way as possible, often by introducing a spectacular change moment where a suggestion of the stakes, too, comes into play. To accomplish this, it's not uncommon (at least in my case, anyway) to want to give those first five pages some spectacular action or a body count or the breaking of a severe bit of news to propel our protagonist to action.

A Thousand Splendid Suns shows us that the first five pages don't have to be chockfull of explosions and space invasions to draw readers in. No, Hosseini's approach to the inciting incident is much more foreboding than any of that.

The below excerpt is from the end of the second and beginning of the third paragraphs of the book. In this scene, Mariam—our protagonist—is a young child who is climbing a chair to retrieve her deceased mother's Chinese tea set from its perch. Nana, the other character featured, is Mariam's grandmother, with whom she lives.

... Nana cherished each blue-and-white porcelain piece, the graceful curve of the pot's spout, the hand-painted finches and chrysanthemums, the dragon on the sugar bowl, meant to ward off evil.

It was this last piece that slipped from Mariam's fingers, that fell to the wooden floorboards of the kolba and shattered.

Did you catch it? I don't mean the porcelain sugar bowl, but rather the inciting incident. It's in there, but easy to miss.

See where it mentions the dragon on the sugar bowl is meant to ward off evil? Yup. That's the piece Mariam shatters.

Let me be clear: A Thousand Splendid Suns is not a work of magic realism; there was no actual ward or protective seal on the sugar bowl. And yet, for a book that pits myth against modernity and past against present, the shattering of this sugar bowl means everything: it sets the stage for the direction of Mariam's arc, one which will lead her through incredible evil (but incredible, dark, and bittersweet triumph as well).

The point is this: the use of subtlety in one's inciting incident can—just like the explosive alternatives—also propel an entire novel forward. In A Thousand Splendid Suns, Hosseini crafts his inciting incident such that readers can't help but feel drawn in by the sense of foreboding that comes with the simple act of a sugar bowl having broken. I know he had me intrigued from page one, anyway.

Exercise: Write a scene or inciting incident that propels a story forward through the use of subtlety or metaphor. How does this compare to other inciting incidents you've written? How might you reframe your approach to writing scenes like this going forward?

Character as Relationships

If there's ever a book that proves character is more than a list of traits, this is it. If that reads as odd coming from me—the guy whose post on character literally treats it as a list of traits—let's explore how we get from a list of traits and to the relationships between characters themselves, all through the lens of A Thousand Splendid Suns.